Tuesday, September 20, 2011

Draft 1 concerns

The most challenging thing was meeting the length requirement...I made it to the 4th page but barely. I also kinda feel like some of my points of somewhat broad and scattered; maybe my paragraphs aren't in the right order, I don't know.

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  1. I had the same concerns with my paper. I felt like I had gone into enough analysis but I still only made it like a quarter the way down on the 4th page. After someone proofread my paper, they said my ideas were kind of scattered too, so rearranging the ideas in a way that makes them flow could help.

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